Alfa Thicker lines

Bravo Cute. But I feel like the feet don't match because everything is line work only.

Charlie this is like early stages right?

Delta Thinker line would be better maybe like 1 or 2 pts more. Also make the foot outlined i guess, so they're not standing out from the rest.

Echo Instead of just telling you what I think could be done better, I'll make a suggestion. Get a piece of paper and a pencil. Draw this image over and over but slightly differently every version. Explore how every element like the eyes, the feet, the feathers could possibly be different. Then jump into illustrator and draw them. By exploring more you will discover new and more refined solutions.

Bravo Great advice Echo. I second that.

Foxtrot Yeah just a pt or two thicker and will be 👌🏼