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Alfa After first round client picked this idea / draft. Hawara means friend in Austria. Starting improvement now - happy about heavy constructive criticism, I know it's not high art.
Bravo If it's going to be on a shirt, I'd say a little less shading on the poles. Gradients don't always print too well.
Charlie Gradients are also more expensive to print so maybe a color halftone effect instead?