Alfa The different line weights are a killer

Bravo This is good but it needs refining. Nothing is dominant, all the drinks are the same size and the type is kind of equal size, it's too balanced if that makes sense. I think the drinks, or the type need to be dominant, then the other smaller. So maybe the type is biggest, with the drinks about 25% of the size.

Charlie One beer, one cocktail, the name - stop - Get some hierarchy in there.

Delta STOP THIS IS TOO MUCH

Echo What Bravo said, but I also think the thickness of your lines on the drinks vary too much. I'd keep them all the same line width

Foxtrot Listen to alfa