Alfa I don't know how I feel about cutting off the black lines with the pink drips. Maybe keep the pink underneath the black?

Bravo No that's really nice, it's emphasizing the dripping effect

Charlie The cut is nice use it less though. Its overkill

Delta Where the drip starts there is a little dent

Echo I would remove the black outline, it’s confusing and takes away from the popsicle effect.