Alfa The slant in California makes it feel off

Bravo The slant is good the whole thing just sucks

Charlie The bottom right one is working best. It certainly doesn't 'suck' which is just a lazy, troll criticism

Delta Haha 'lazy, troll criticism' very well stated and agreed.

Echo I'd be inclined to join the 'o' to the 'r'...

Foxtrot The "for" does seem a little distant in spacing but other than that I could definitely see this on a shirt